a haiku

Three things to say today,
ensuite five or six distractions:
a photograph lost.





(I wrote a poem! [Writers: thoughts on the colon? I’m really not sure about the punctuation there.] This makes me very exited. We’ll see if I get around to it though, the three things I mean.)

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One thought on “a haiku

  1. Is the photograph lost one of the distractions? If so, the colon works…If you mean it otherwise, I suggest a dash, perhaps?

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